I took this photo on last week, I focus on the rain, which I think it adds more depth on this photo, the light for me which was good, I change the sky light because the original light was way too bright, so I change and make sure the light were balanced, as you can see the photo was cut into two areas, on the bottom of the photo were cars,street and house, but on the top of the photo were only sky, which I think it was really cool because it adds more depth on this photo,the rain on the glasses for me were adds more depth too, as you can see the rain gets more in focus on the right side of the photo, which I think was really god, the only thing I like to change was the bottom of the right, the tree was kind of distracting, if I get rid of that, it would look better.
I like the focus you were able to get on the rain drops on the window. I think that the rain drops add more detail than if the photo was just a shot out the school window. I also like the lighting in the photo. The lighting is not harsh and does not over expose any thing in the photo. I also like the angle you took the photo at. It gives the viewer a different perspective than if it was just a straight on shot. The only thing I would change about the photo is maybe crop out some of the clouds. I think that if you did that the focus on the raindrops in the photo would be better.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment, I like the way you think, about the clouds that you were talking about, I guess I may agree with you , because right now I look at this photo, the sky was really bright and white, you can hardly find the clouds in the sky, and the focus on the raindrops was my camera problem, I try to focus on the raindrops but it just doesn't allow me to focus on, I will try to fix it, thank you.
DeleteI love the focus of the raindrops, to me it almost looks like an old fashion photo which I like. I agree with you that the sky light compliments the photo very nicely. I do feel though that any lighter would have been too light like you said. I also like the flag off to the right, I think it adds a nice touch, good job.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment and thanks for like my photo, the sky that you talk about was good, but I try to change it, maybe crop out some of the clouds, because you see the sky was really bright and white, there were nothing on it, it kind feel empty, also the light which was somethings that I may want to change, it's just too bright on this photo,anyway I will try to change it on my next photo, thank you.
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